Excellent job with this one. I don't work in a café myself, but in my own corner of working life, I'm usually the one fulfilling that role for others. Intended or not, the piece was entirely relatable.
Thanks James. Particularly for taking the time to read into the archive a bit as it can sometimes feel like a timeline rather than a collection - so its great you found this.
I am glad this related to you. Thanks for reaching out here, its given me pause to read your own work and an opportunity to subscribe. Great to have found you.
"She was looking to fill her time,
Without knowing how to use it."
The way I caught a stray at the beginning of the poem. In all seriousness, this was a calming read.
Thank you Daniel for reaching out and for the sub 🙏
Love this. I felt as though I knew her.
Thank you Pamela for reading, connecting and the support. I really appreciate it.
I love your poetry David. I don't always get around enough to read everyone, but your work always resonates with me.
🙏🙏🙏
And her telling eyes
Softly searched
The swirling currents
For safe harbour
🙏
Smoothly glides...
Thanks Fotini for reading and commenting. :)
Excellent job with this one. I don't work in a café myself, but in my own corner of working life, I'm usually the one fulfilling that role for others. Intended or not, the piece was entirely relatable.
Thanks James. Particularly for taking the time to read into the archive a bit as it can sometimes feel like a timeline rather than a collection - so its great you found this.
I am glad this related to you. Thanks for reaching out here, its given me pause to read your own work and an opportunity to subscribe. Great to have found you.
Oh wow, this is heartbreaking and relatable and beautifully observed.
Apologies for only seeing this comment now, came here for another more recent and spotted your reaction. I appreciate you taking the time!
I would not say a little different but a lot different. Not so many behave or act like it. The situation seems awkward to me.
That was lovely David.
Thanks Elaine, and also for all your support. Really appreciated!
Yes i think we all kind of have to find our place, its easier for some moreso than others. We've all been there in some way.