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Pamela Leavey's avatar

I really enjoyed reading this David.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much, Pamela! 🙏 Always appreciate your time and comments! And thanks also for the share.

The Sea in Me's avatar

'And so, he was early to eat and sat alone amongst the tables'

Love the experiment with form.

David Donoghue's avatar

Ah thanks so much! Yes trying out things.

Brian Funke's avatar

Lovely…fun to listen to and read simultaneously!

David Donoghue's avatar

Excellent delighted to hear that! Thanks for your time and attention ☺️ means a lot! 🙏

Fotini Masika's avatar

There is a sadness there among the lively crowd, its silence louder than the music. Beautifully written, David!

David Donoghue's avatar

Thank you so much, Fotini.

rena's avatar

Thank you for taking us to this delightful street festival. I felt quite present 🎺

David Donoghue's avatar

Awesome! It was great bringing myself back there also. Another time.

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Sep 9, 2024
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David Donoghue's avatar

Oh good to hear you liked it. Hope it brightened your day! Have a great week! And thanks for the share!