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The Sea in Me's avatar

Wow David, you're back! ⚡

David Donoghue's avatar

I am it seems! 😅

Tara Connor's avatar

Welcome back! And what a lovely piece to return on.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much, Tara. Glad you liked it and thanks for dropping by!

Pamela Leavey's avatar

Yes, David, this is stunning prose felt intrinsically!

Richbee's avatar

An aria that has the depth of waves that sweep song ley lines across countries to guide and orchestrate the flow of movement in strokes. I am crest fallen speechless.

David Donoghue's avatar

Wow Richard, thank you 🙏

Sarah Howard Lapine's avatar

Oh, I love this one. "Your scent and the song it will sing in my throat on the in-breath." So beautiful. Words of possibility, if only we step through the door into that space of potential.! The images are strong, yet also feel translucent- I don't know if that makes sense, but that feeling of what we can't always readily perceive.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much for reading, Sarah! It is great to hear it is resonating 🙏🙏