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Jeff RE's avatar

Wonderful David! I love every bit of this, and especially resonate with your reflections about how we really are connected to the flow of the seasons.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much for reading, Jeff! Yep whether we like it or not we are part of it all 😅

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

April 1 brought what I hope is our last winter snowfall. Looking forward to the weather finally easing itself into its season. Thank you, David.

David Donoghue's avatar

I hope so Paul. Sometimes winter can linger a little longer into the year, but I hope it fades quickly now as the sun makes its way a little higher every day. We have been getting a little warmer every day but with it comes storms and rain.. it is a bit better than snow I suppose.

Fotini Masika's avatar

The cadence of the poem is exuberant.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments! 🙏

Fotini Masika's avatar

Oh, I have many poems of yours still to read, do expect more comments.

The Sea in Me's avatar

Love the imagery, the beats and the Hope against the bleak in this David. Gorgeous.

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Apr 4, 2024
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David Donoghue's avatar

Knew there was a bit of Irish in there 😃. Yes we all feel the seasons change one way or another. It is in there somewhere.