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Pamela Leavey's avatar

Wow, David. So deep, so intense. So raw and one questions "why"?

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Thanks for the comment, Pamela. Sorry I am sometimes not sure where to reply when its both a note and a comment. But I really appreciate getting both and your support means a huge amount, thank you. :)

The Sea in Me's avatar

Just seeing this now.

Powerful David, love the urgency and energy. And seeing the original handwriting.

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Thanks so much. Yea I like to have a good image with each post but I didn't really have a photo which fit the theme. I have considered some shots of the original notebook in the past but always a bit concerned its a little boring... anyway this time I went with it :)

Holly's avatar

Powerful!!!! Thank you!!!

David Donoghue's avatar

No, thank you for reading.

Anna Pulley's avatar

Powerful.

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Thank you so much for reading, Anna. 🙏

Karen FitzGerald's avatar

My first David Donoghue read, and it's a WOW. I recognize some excellent musicianship in this piece. I look forward to reading more.

David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. Its great to have you here and to connect!

Leon Brown, Jr.'s avatar

Excellent poem!

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Thank you, Leon. I really appreciate you reading and commenting 🙏

Leon Brown, Jr.'s avatar

My pleasure, David!

Fotini Masika's avatar

Overwhelmed by this, David.

David Donoghue's avatar

🙏 thank you so much for taking the time to read.

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Apr 12, 2024
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Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

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Apr 11, 2024
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Robin, thank you so much for taking the time to comment. Quietly delighted it struck a chord with you :)

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Apr 11, 2024
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David Donoghue's avatar

Humbled that you read it out loud to your kitchen. What a world to think something could come out as a simple thought in a brain on one side of the planet and end up bouncing off the walls and the washing up liquid in a kitchen on the other... it is actually crazy this is possible. Thank you for doing that :)