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Brian Funke's avatar

This is stunning. Prose describing the dissolution of the ego (at least my interpretation)...💡

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David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks so much, Brian. Firstly I hugely appreciate you taking the time to read and respond! And absolutely, I think you are right about the ego considering so much just stops when we sleep, all of that goes away... I think I found myself trying to describe that abstract nothingness in some way - it was both fun and challenging

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David Donoghue's avatar

Thanks Mike! Really appreciate it. Yes just an interesting thing that I thought would be a good challenge. Happy it came out how it did and that others enjoy it.

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